the description matches the photos. Overall they are really good. The best one is the paper. My least favorite is the person with the 14 on the back of their sweatshirt. There is to much going on in the background. The quote blends in. good job tho!
Yes the pictures match the description. My favorite picture is the last one because the contrast looks really nice in the image and the quote is the clearest out of the rest. My least favorite picture is of the snowman because the quote overlaps the image. But overall good job!
You need to describe your concentration in more detail and using more visual ideas/language. The photos are good...the text matches the mood of the photos and enhances them. I like the first one, but a close up of a splash would have been good. 2nd is very cute. The 3rd could use some work to match the quote...the rain works, but why does she deserve sun? I like the 5th, but maybe the note should have some sort of 'trust' issue going on...a breakup note...a 'I'm sorry' note? Overall solid photos but I'd like to see you take more risks and express yourself more. 45/50
the description matches the photos. Overall they are really good. The best one is the paper. My least favorite is the person with the 14 on the back of their sweatshirt. There is to much going on in the background. The quote blends in. good job tho!
ReplyDeleteYes the pictures match the description. My favorite picture is the last one because the contrast looks really nice in the image and the quote is the clearest out of the rest. My least favorite picture is of the snowman because the quote overlaps the image. But overall good job!
ReplyDeleteYou need to describe your concentration in more detail and using more visual ideas/language. The photos are good...the text matches the mood of the photos and enhances them. I like the first one, but a close up of a splash would have been good. 2nd is very cute. The 3rd could use some work to match the quote...the rain works, but why does she deserve sun? I like the 5th, but maybe the note should have some sort of 'trust' issue going on...a breakup note...a 'I'm sorry' note? Overall solid photos but I'd like to see you take more risks and express yourself more. 45/50
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